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    dots Submission Name: Oh God of Firedots
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    Author: IHateYou
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       about a guy who kidnapped a girl and tortured her with a blow torch. she pretended to like it and he stopped locking her up. Then she escaped and called the cops. Her captor later shot himself.


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    dotsOh God of Firedots
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    Oh god of fire
    Burn your heart
    So as not to feel
    What won’t be real.
    Oh Is it love?
    Or another’s deceit?
    With care in her eyes
    God falls asleep
    And wakes to find
    His captive lover
    Has captivated
    the police.




    Submitted on 2008-05-03 12:37:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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