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Afterglow


Author: brokenmuse
ASL Info:    26/F/AL
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 756 /734 /161
Words: 78
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Just thinking back to this afternoon, and feeling a little inspired.


Afterglow



tangled up
in old bedsheets
we smoke,
taking heady puffs
of cheap cigarettes
naked and sweating
our breath slowing up
the passion still flooding
through slick, entangled limbs
the smell of lust
permeates the small room
lacing it with the scent of us
the sun through the window
lights up the old blue curtain
and I know that
here in bed, and nude
alone with you
I am at home
and I am in heaven





Submitted on 2008-05-04 04:31:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's so achingly beautiful. It's perfect. I know critique is what you're after, instead of glowing praise but that's all you'll get from me. beautiful imagery of a feeling everyone knows but can scarcely putinto words to do it justice. you have.
| Posted on 2008-05-13 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]
  Marvelous description indeed
| Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
  Marvelous description of the afterglow of lovemaking! You done well, lovely lady!!
| Posted on 2008-05-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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