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    dots Submission Name: low-fat break fastdots
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    Author: hardestpart
    Elite Ratio:    3.43 - 1/1/2
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    i feel stepped on with the heel
    open like a nail wound
    almost sepia
    in the grass
    among trees and cows
    that ruminate brains happily
    with soil besmeared teeth
    wrapped in other scraps
    of human rase and other rases
    cows are gentle creatures

    i am sliced here
    like a loaf of low-fat brown bread
    for breakfast
    it may be your breakfast
    or you may choose the grey-scale girl
    fighting with the staircase right down
    where my feet have never touched
    earth

    she’s bright she’s pale she’s
    gorgeous
    and repeatable
    and i almost fall to see her
    behind your window in the morning
    you seem so tender with your cup of tea
    that you almost forget
    to drag her
    me

    well i must say it’s been calories
    since i’ve looked for your kind
    and i feel stepped on like a
    little old red paint peel
    from a shattered wall
    wishing i were green
    like a cow’s teeth after eating a
    dozen of beautiful boys
    like you my friend
    and yes i must say i’m hungry
    but you see my stomach has gone wild
    since nobody got to fill it
    with anything of your kind

    and
    are you aware
    of my beautiful sprained smile
    bind in plaster stone




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      Bravo! This piece was very unique and had layeras like an onion or a cake. There are some pieces that almost demand to be read out loud - like an open mic night - and this is one of these pieces. Brillaint on social, religious and many other levels.
    A fav!
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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