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Too f***'*d to think

Author: rawpot
ASL Info:    24/M/India
Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383 /256 /84
Words: 125
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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expression of the state

Too f***'*d to think

sitting with my legs stretched,
listening to fabulous music,
i am horrendously bemused

lame experiments i conduct of myself,
life plunging through humorless waste buckets,
spells and spelling errors

crazed and oozed and strapped on to idiot box,
glued to craziness,
stark contrast to diplomacy of striving characters,

complusively losing, adversly loathing,
sadly and sadistically blemishing,
distraught, anger and hate consuming,

murderously damning a soul
so bright, so elite, so good, so worshiped,
faked, faked in to friendships,

faked in to goodness of relationships,
only knowing the false intentions,
mystifications, dissatisfactions and worst part of it all,

dire consequences of such murders done to my soul.
I am too f****d to think,
sorry shit isnt working

Submitted on 2008-05-04 10:11:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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