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Fate Brings Everlasting Suffering.

Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
ASL Info:    22/f/PA
Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46 /119 /104
Words: 69
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Fate Brings Everlasting Suffering.

As he snatched your soul away,
I was certain you see—
That this heart would fade away;
For it was left in that small bag carried
As you traveled down that path;
Day broke
And the night seeped through its cracks.
As he disappeared,
I was assured that we would meet again—
To dance gaily on a plain of butterflies
Never to be heard from ever again.

Submitted on 2008-05-04 14:21:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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