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    dots Submission Name: Shadowsdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 1066/1177/572
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
    Total Views: 126
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dots Shadowsdots
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    Below a sad and soaring loon
    The temple stair is green with mold,
    Though in the dawn is shot with gold,
    At dusk with silver from the moon.

    Now ghost ships in the night are moored
    Against the quay of crumbled oak
    As shadows round the bay still cloak
    These triremes bound with silver cord.

    Nearby the ruined, buried town
    Sleeps like a soft and silent breeze
    Below the tall and leafless trees
    That wear the moonlight like a gown.

    Here on the headland night will bring
    Soft voices speaking in strange tongues
    From spectral lips and spectral lungs,
    The air’s filled with their whispering.

    And no more do the clamors fall
    To echo down the avenues,
    No more the royal retinues,
    The music or the madrigals.

    The watchman, who is ashen, pale,
    Points to the far periphery
    Upon the sable midnight sea,
    Where billows one lone ghostly sail.

    Below a sad and soaring loon
    The temple stair is green with mold,
    Though in the dawn is shot with gold,
    At dusk with silver from the moon.





    Submitted on 2008-05-05 09:51:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love your writing, as you well know. I just can't get the image of the sea out of my head when I read your work.

    love and peace my friend.
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Madelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      My favorite themes include the wind, the Sea, and shadows, and this deligtful poem has two of the three!!

    A most outstanding mythical and ghostly tale, with the mood and mystery of ancient harbors! Delightful reading once again, my able friend in letters!!!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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