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Submission Name:
Writer's Block
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Author:
never_far_away
ASL Info:
20-female-TX
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2.46 - 105/92/53
Words:
53
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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i couldn't think of anything to write so i wrote this....
Writer's Block
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Oh, writer’s block
Why do you cloud my mind?
You suppress my emotions
And fade my clarity
How can I rid myself
Of such depression,
To be free from
Your iron hold?
Reveal some weakness
That I may seize upon
To win back me
Eloquent words to verse
Submitted on 2008-05-05 18:27:10
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Aaargh! Writer's block! cusswords!
Very expressive poem, echoing the thoughts of all of us writers when blocked! Don't we all wish we knew the magic formula on how to get "unblocked"!!
You might enjoy "The Unheard Song" at my site; kinda on the same subject, but about the muse!
Keep writing, lovely lady!
| Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by
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