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    dots Submission Name: Writer's Blockdots
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    Author: never_far_away
    ASL Info:    20-female-TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 105/92/53
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 528
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    Description:
       i couldn't think of anything to write so i wrote this....


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    dotsWriter's Blockdots
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    Oh, writer’s block
    Why do you cloud my mind?
    You suppress my emotions
    And fade my clarity

    How can I rid myself
    Of such depression,
    To be free from
    Your iron hold?

    Reveal some weakness
    That I may seize upon
    To win back me
    Eloquent words to verse




    Submitted on 2008-05-05 18:27:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aaargh! Writer's block! cusswords!

    Very expressive poem, echoing the thoughts of all of us writers when blocked! Don't we all wish we knew the magic formula on how to get "unblocked"!!

    You might enjoy "The Unheard Song" at my site; kinda on the same subject, but about the muse!

    Keep writing, lovely lady!

    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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