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    dots Submission Name: uphilldots
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    Author: armand
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    Here we go again my, friend

    does it hurt to feel the way we feel?
    under the oath of a sacred word
    did you hear about the deal I made with the devil?
    and I missed my chance to talk to, God
    and blood is deep while we change for the ones we love
    or do we both really matter?
    pushing our way uphill




    Submitted on 2008-05-05 18:55:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      One cannot change him or herself. And that is why life is so uphill isn't it? And if you must speak with God, you have to scream really loud because he is pretty far, there are no trains to his side of town. The devil however, just find a chair, sit there and wait...he will find you.

    Do we matter? You bet. But only to the ones who love us, not necessarily the ones we love.

    I must go wash my mouth out.

    MyX
    | Posted on 2009-05-30 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece reflects struggle - it could represent relationship struggles, growing struggles, life struggles (which encompasses a lot these days!) - you have always been a writer that reveals your situations and struggles and love and concerns - ups & downs so I just want to send out some love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share because you grew a lot over the years we've all been on here.

    Keep on keepin on friend and here are some special smiles
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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