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    dots Submission Name: Bird Call & Bumble Bee Haikudots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
    Total Views: 586
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 198



    Description:
       Out on the back patio - enjoying our paradise and connecting with nature ~*~
    Oh yeah....that's how we roll around here - The Rainbow Bubble
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share ES
    tif ~*~


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    dotsBird Call & Bumble Bee Haikudots
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    Bird Song sings multi-
    tonal our paradis is
    a choir divine
    ~*~


    Bumble Bee Black &
    Yellow Orb Bouncing Along
    Life is A Flower
    ~*~




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      Bird brain tweets, tra-la
    la-la, on branch of tree,
    a guard divice.

    Cicada shrill voice
    Bird flitters to its singsong
    Nestlings are now fed.

    (thought I would send you a reciprocal gift to read. Thank you for yours.)
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      You are the Dylan of flowers, the Kerouac of the trees.

    Whatever you say, tiff, it always drips with life and growth and nature.

    It's in your nature. Hee hee ;)

    I like the bird song one the best. Just a question, did you spell "paradise" incorrectly on purpose or is that just a typo? Sometimes we spell things wrong on purpose.

    It has a meaning.

    She's the New Mother Nature taking over....

    ~AsiaticFox
    | Posted on 2008-05-07 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      I have always liked your writing! Great job again!
    Andie
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm an old country boy and I love nature writes! These rock, Tif! Here's to the the birds and the bees! Delightful write, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely look at nature, Tiff! Bees buzzing and birds singing add to the joy I find in this season. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-05-05 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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