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    dots Submission Name: You can't please everybody, but you can pleasdots
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    Author: fryte
    ASL Info:    32/male/Pomona
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 319/342/88
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1427



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    You can't please everybody, but you can please yourself


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    Poetic entity
    Erotic iambic crevice
    sweet fleshly alliteration
    Caressing the supple breasts
    Of metaphorical rants
    Tonguing the canal of minimalism
    Animalistic acronym incarnate
    Urges us to
    Pump it
    Furiously
    To the thoughts
    You unearth
    The soul of Dionysus
    Andromeda
    Adam and Eve
    Whispering
    A subdued sonnet
    Underneath the tree of
    Forbidden romanticism
    In and out in and out
    Of the arcane world of surrealism
    The soft zephyr of each verse
    Tantric stanzas swinging with
    Promiscuous quatrains
    Demigod of verbose existentialism
    Sanctimonious poetry
    You know just how to
    Convey sultry subtleties
    With orgasmic
    Orgiastic
    Bombastic overtones
    You-
    Subjective aphrodisiac
    Intersecting blood and emotion
    Expression
    The almighty exploit
    Sex of the gods
    Social commentary
    Irreverent relevance
    An epilogue
    Of revelation
    For the omega
    Consecrate these pages
    With rhythmic pen penetrations
    Immaculate conception
    Of the redeemer
    The accuser the savior
    The fusion of heaven and hell
    Oh beautiful creature
    Of cathartic release
    Release me




    Submitted on 2008-05-06 02:15:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      the almighty exploit. haha sounds like a term used for the press.
    | Posted on 2008-06-16 00:00:00 | by oneinchman | [ Reply to This ]
      (off the top of my head, the feminazi in me wonders why you didn't capitalise eve :P)

    You're a crazy mofo.
    And you like Nick Cave.


    You're alright in my book, mister.

    (not that my book really matters. it's more like an imaginary list, really.)



    whee... off to sell yuppies some fruit. yep.
    | Posted on 2008-05-24 00:00:00 | by sadtrapofgravit | [ Reply to This ]


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