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    dots Submission Name: Dream Boydots
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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 593
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 337



    Description:
       One of the poems directly from my heart. Reflects reality, with a dose of dreams.


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    dotsDream Boydots
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    Every girl has a dream boy she keeps
    Every girl has a secret she weeps
    Every night a boy enters her dreams
    He stays till the last moonbeam
    While she awaits his presence in daylight
    He escapes from reality with all his might
    When dreams came true, he knew
    Nothing good would follow through




    Submitted on 2008-05-06 09:07:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well done! There's an old popular song here in the US titled "Dream Lover", and your delightful poem reminded me of it. Nice work.
    | Posted on 2008-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and sweet, but very well done.

    No one can kill our dreams, no matter how hard they try.
    | Posted on 2008-05-25 00:00:00 | by EseanB | [ Reply to This ]


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