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    dots Submission Name: Waterfalldots
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    Author: lynn7
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 297/212/58
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 59
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsWaterfalldots
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    Our love over flows
    from the depth within
    I'll hold your hand
    if you'll hold mine
    we have only grown closer
    and not a part
    just let go of this world
    let the wind guide you
    where you go I will join
    no matter how it ends
    or how it starts
    so lets take a ride
    on the water
    to find our Beginning
    and the end
    with no fear
    no regret
    only love




    Submitted on 2008-05-06 22:25:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      thanx for the comment on promice land i am glad it lifted you in that way

    i liked yor post has a subtle fow as the title suggest but yet a waterfall can be very decieving for some waterfalls start with a trickle and then the next moment could be extreme

    i am going to add to tat piece today

    thanx again
    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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