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    dots Submission Name: losing youdots
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    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    19/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 531/223/75
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotslosing youdots
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    The smell of wet concrete
    I’m losing you to wet concrete and cold air
    Losing you to the faces I saw in trees as a child
    Faces in trees I still se
    Gnarled mottled faces
    With beetle eyes
    And gaping mouths
    Faces I’ll probably never stop seeing
    I’m losing you to whispers in the leaves
    To the fog that clings to my ankles




    Submitted on 2008-05-06 23:14:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    This is how concrete smells...
    This is how fog clings...

    This is how one says "I love you"...

    This is what chokes us.

    We all die... smiling...


    | Posted on 2008-08-20 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]
      ...


    I just want to sit here,
    wrapped in ice and smoke,
    and whisper,

    and release breaths
    that make me shiver
    inside myself...





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    beautiful, m'dear... gorgeous. chilly and haunting, a lil bit...)

    hm.

    yep...
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by diamondmind | [ Reply to This ]



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