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    dots Submission Name: Dreamsdots
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    Author: -Lith-Ium-
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 56/107/58
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 873
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       Whatever Dreams May Come


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    dotsDreamsdots
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    Forgotten screenplay, lost in time
    Between the lines of sorrow
    Only a mind could see the rhyme
    That leads into 'tomorrow'.

    Whatever will or will not be
    We 'never' cease to run
    Whatever hearts will dare to see
    Whatever dreams may come.

    And how sweet the illusion now
    The poison even sweeter
    Your very thoughts, they lie, oh, how
    Can sweetness be so bitter?

    Whatever choice you see your Self
    With 'reason' to have done,
    Look on the now so dusty shelf,
    For other dreams to come.




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