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    dots Submission Name: No novocaine at handdots
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    Author: eve1684
    ASL Info:    24/F/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 1798/938/114
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       it is called
    No Novocaine at hand - Dissection of feelings or words

    it's the second part of my No Novocaine at hand poems. and it's old stuff. I haven't been writing in ages. But it states so clearly how I feel at the moment..


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    dotsNo novocaine at handdots
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    Your fingers leave traces in old white and young red
    don’t go away again
    and those glassy empty tears won’t drown you
    the sun will dry them in seconds
    I welcome back this unnamed feeling that’s so familiar to me
    been here before
    and your hand sleeps on my mouth, defending it against oxygen
    please don’t scream they can’t hear you, can’t feel you
    I’m hushed, my hands tied to the floor
    these days people can’t stand silence anymore
    you used to help me, spilling pain in fragments and images on paper
    and this time you cannot escape, I’ve shut the door
    words die in my mind before they’ve grown enough to be born
    live fast, die young
    their bodies lie on cold, silver beds
    sleep little baby, sleep, I’ll sing you a lullaby
    and their tombs will be opened with scalpels




    Submitted on 2008-05-07 05:43:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOAH!!! I LOVE this poem!!!!!
    Ok, I'm going to be a little less enthusiastic now...maybe. God, I seriously love how you've got two poems going on at the same time, running through each other and making complete and utter sense! And wow, the images in my head after reading that....all I can say is.....FAVE!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by Cat | [ Reply to This ]



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