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    dots Submission Name: Fun House Mirror (a work in progress)dots
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    Author: Selene
    ASL Info:    20/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 149/159/53
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       As the title says this poem is in the middle of the creative process, but the idea is that a funhouse mirror can show a person something they want but not what was real, just like a person can perceive people as friends but at the end of the day an aquaintance isn't the same thing as a friend.


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    dotsFun House Mirror (a work in progress)dots
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    Warped and Twisted
    projecting only lies
    illusions when discovered
    bring heartbreaking truths.
    The cruelest part
    honesty, which destroys
    the warped image
    becomes the weapon
    that breaks the heart.




    Submitted on 2008-05-07 20:05:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love short poems, i know that this is a work in progress, but i really like it as it is,

    It leaves you to ponder, and i love the use of the fun house mirror imagery, very creative and apt.

    Hope the end product is just as good.
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by Mr R | [ Reply to This ]
      My Stepmother used to say "it's the truth that hurts"!

    What's better, to be hurt by the truth, or soothed by the illusion? I dunno!

    Very contemplative write, which "scratches" ones mind and makes you think! Well done, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-05-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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