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    dots Submission Name: the red sea was influenceddots
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    Author: Kina Keloid
    ASL Info:    15/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 1/3/3
    Words: 338
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       i wrote this poem, whiles ago, after unintenionally influencing a friend to cause pain upon themselves. it is what it is


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    lets cut together on this rainy day
    and bleed from all our pores
    our blood will surely find its way
    from street curb drains to ocean shores
    from ocean shores to the deep abyss
    we will spread the latest plague
    and when they question us for all this
    our answers will be vague
    we wont die if weve gotten this far
    and those who think we will
    well cut them open, leaving their chest ajar
    for us, another kill
    before the light even teases their eyes
    we can throw their bodies amongst the seas
    saltwater wounds, hear their cries
    the melodious chime will set you free
    from the deep abyss and volcanic rock
    at the bottom of the ocean
    blood shed will travel from dock to dock
    carried by violent waves of emotion
    and every bit of us, we will be known
    the world will be aware
    all our hardhips, ive cut to see bone
    due to the lack of nurture and care
    we cut because we have suffered
    and we cut for the release
    because we were never loved by our mothers
    and our fathers were diseased
    they cant seem to figure it out
    what we need to heal
    its not just a matter of our lips in a pout
    we cant be treated as if our hearts dont feel
    we, you and i, know it as addiction
    we know it to be true to ourselves
    unlike a novel made of fiction
    we are not to be text pulled off the shelves
    we are fighting the most brutal of wars
    against our own inflicted person
    yet we only yearn for more and more
    the worst of the exertion
    well, this rainy day has lasted while
    the blade has not mistreated
    its worth the cost of a broken smile
    that times ago was defeated
    we shall clean our wounds and call it days end
    before we bleed a horrible death
    it is in this time that our skin can mend
    but thinking well stop dont hold your breath




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