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    dots Submission Name: Robot Vs. Pandadots
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    Author: GOGO1877
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 32/128/81
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 79
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    Bytes: 1166



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    dotsRobot Vs. Pandadots
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    running out of different times
    it just sounds the same only different lines
    and everybody wants to be so scene
    well, kicking out a window won't make you breathe
    no more better ways to run around
    they don't dance anymore they just hit the ground
    and there happy with any sound
    but i can't accept that
    no, i won't accept that

    now every kid's out having fun
    they all want to be someone
    but, their happy with any sound
    and i just wanna dance

    the brain aint working when you want it to
    it's not a new concept, i keep sticking like glue
    i need a push and a pull to get out of this mess
    'cause i won't accept it
    yeah, i won't accept that

    but, it's so hard to look the other way
    when there's neon lights flashing every way
    but when the power goes out
    no more neon lights to shout about
    and the kids run around giant obstacles
    a scene to break, a scene for fools
    another scene that will never last
    and i just wanna dance




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    ||| Comments |||
      I have to say, I really like these lyrics. There isn't much I could say is wrong with them I mean, except in the first verse its they're instead of there (as in they are happy with any sound shortened to they're happy with any sound).

    I mean normally I'd be all like 'eww you ended 2 lines in a row with the same word' in the last part but running it through my head it doesn't sound that bad at all.

    More important than that however, your lyrics are clever, relevant (extremely) to today's people, meaningful and I like the way you say 'And I just wanna dance' like all these people trying to be something false, another passing phase, just trying to fit in and be cool and not really caring about what the music actually sounds like but you don't care about any of that you just want to dance (and I'm not sure but I'm guessing that means u want good music to dance to implying you care more about the music than the fad or being cool)

    Anyway I thought it was all pretty awesome.
    | Posted on 2008-05-09 00:00:00 | by DeadlyDodo | [ Reply to This ]



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