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    dots Submission Name: Compulsiondots
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    Author: SaddenedSongbrd
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 7/22/37
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsCompulsiondots
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    Its a compulsion
    the razor, my skin
    and the blood
    I crave it
    but feel nothing
    the wind goes through me
    I feel nothing
    I am hollow
    with a hole where
    my heart once was
    I've cut out the feeling
    there is no pain
    I feel as though
    I have never known,
    never felt,
    never thought--
    anything.
    That I am blank
    my arms are painted
    with my secret shame
    there are no more tears
    the dripping comes from
    the vein, my arm
    there is no method
    to my madness
    I have no reason
    besides the fact that
    I want to feel it-pain
    but I can't anymore.
    physically weary,
    mentally depressed.
    There is no hope
    for the hopeless.




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