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    dots Submission Name: Alcoholism.dots
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    Author: SaddenedSongbrd
    Elite Ratio:    2.16 - 7/19/27
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 66
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    dotsAlcoholism.dots
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    I drink it all
    you watch me fall
    into my tears
    of alcohol.

    no turning back
    the future's black
    my heart beats hard
    a panic attack

    I'm on the floor
    I still crave more
    to make me numb
    ..not so sore.

    I grab the bottle
    it's like a gun
    I shoot it down
    my life is done.




    Submitted on 2008-05-08 22:16:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was ok, sounded more like it could be a song, and a good one! it was short and to the point and easy to understand. i've known addictions too well, this was one of them. thnx for sharing!
    | Posted on 2008-05-09 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      this is nice... but i'm partial to this particular post on the topic :D

    http://www.eliteskills.com/z/142120
    | Posted on 2008-05-09 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]



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