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    dots Submission Name: Promisedots
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    Author: SaddenedSongbrd
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 7/21/36
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    So messed up for so long
    so I sang my sorrow song
    a life of excuses and regret
    and all the days I was upset
    I'm sick of being sad, in pain
    I'm sick of cutting at the vein
    Done with all this life of lies
    I became someone I despise
    I know you worry and are upset
    Every time I make another threat
    I saw your eyes full of tears
    let me help them disappear--
    I'm done with hurting myself.




    Submitted on 2008-05-08 22:19:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Two words. Sad and heartfelt. I could feel the sorrow thru your words. Why hurt yourself though when you have so many ppl that care about you. THese types of things need to be talked about because if not u might hurt someone u really care bout.
    | Posted on 2008-08-16 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey i can totally relate to this. this kind of sounds like the boat i've been in since october. it really gets to the heart of a person and shows that inner struggle of not being able to help themselves, and yet wanting to quit. very nice piece of work.
    | Posted on 2008-06-17 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]



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