Talking on my Skin. -------------------------------------------
I do my talking on my skin
to show you what I feel within
words are all I have to say
but its hard at the end of the day
when no one is around to hear
the reasons.. so the scars appear
the scars that show all of my shame
this is who your friend became..
I'm not happy and not proud
and I want to cry aloud
I want to tell you how I feel
and I don't want to conceal
these scars under my sleeves anymore
But it's a craving hard to ignore.
So I'm asking for your aid
take me from the masquerade
and never see me as weak
all I need is just to speak.
all I need is for your ear
for all the pain to disappear.
This was very interesting, mainly because cutting is really all I write about. It was very descriptive but I felt like it was lacking somewhat on emotion. It also seemed to start off strong with a great flow, but I don't feel like the end was as good as it could be. Maybe just some playing with the words a little. Minor tweaks. Other than that it was excellent. Good write.
Submission Name: Talking on my Skin.
