Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Feathersdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    15/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 11/24/52
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 79
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 580



    Description:
       I'm sorry feathered friend, that you met your end.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFeathersdots
    -------------------------------------------


    The sun setts on this small life. Brilliant you once were now, laying perished on the forest floor. I pray your spirit, one wild and free, will fly through the skies where you will rest in peace. I can't help but feel sad when I see you there, stricken down. You flew through the air only yesterday, but the flame of you life has gone away. I can only dream of how grand you life must have been. Wishing that maybe someday I might also have wings. Sleep now dear bird, I know I'm sounding absurd, praying that this poor feathered creature, might have a brighter future.




    Submitted on 2008-05-09 02:15:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    161226



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry