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    dots Submission Name: Your touch..dots
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    Author: Luvmiannie
    ASL Info:    30 something
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 20/7/14
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsYour touch..dots
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    i miss your touch.. the sound of your heart when im up close.. the smell of your skin as my lips gently run across it.. your skin so beautiful in the moon light for my pleasure.. i miss your curve in motion.. the grace of imaginative desire peaking in every stroke nn duhh…you intensify my secret inhabitations.. taking care not to upset its delicate nature..

    i miss you so much,
    i miss it soo much,
    i want it,
    i want it,
    i want it ta ta want it ta want it ta want ta

    run my fingers through my own hair.. arch my back in accordance with your bodies law of gravitation.. swaying your sward from left to right.. victoriously leading to sear delight... General lend an ear.. your soldier is near needing special attention from you dear..




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      i felt passion from it very touching strong heart feelings, ty
    | Posted on 2009-03-08 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      this is very touching
    it has nice ambiance about it
    | Posted on 2008-05-12 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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