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    dots Submission Name: Point of viewdots
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    Author: Fadeintoreality
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 33/114/64
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsPoint of viewdots
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    From one point of view
    the grass is always greener
    and the wine always sweeter
    on the other persons side.
    And from another point of view
    the sky is so much bluer
    and your friends are so much truer
    on the other persons side
    from our point of view
    the hearts are so much lighter
    and the lights shine so much brighter
    from the other persons view
    from their point of view
    they stand so much taller
    while we are so much smaller
    on the other persons side
    them
    us
    we
    they
    it doesnt matter either way
    smart
    dumb
    strong
    lame
    one way or another, we are all the smae
    in our youth, we know the truth
    its sometimes hard to find
    but win or lose
    we all must chose
    and finally make up our mids
    who?
    what?
    where?
    why?
    and all thats in between
    ditz
    jock
    brain
    goth
    or just plain drama queen?
    you've got one life
    so live it now
    and find out who you are
    see, the sun may never rise again
    and tomorrowsgone to far




    Submitted on 2008-05-10 15:45:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very upbeat and positive with a message to think for yourself. I understand why you used some of the trite wording Perhaps in another time and piece you might want to try to find a way to express those ideals in new terms. It is true, we base to much of our wants on what other people have; I think, it is because we have ingrained Symbolic indicaters=status too deeply in our culture.
    | Posted on 2008-05-10 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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