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    dots Submission Name: Tempting The Skydots
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    Author: mugsy
    ASL Info:    68/M/Sooke/ B.C./Can.
    Elite Ratio:    4.1 - 138/106/35
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTempting The Skydots
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    Take me by the wing
    And fly me high
    To azure space
    And sunlit sky
    Where clouds puff proud
    And billow white
    Where blue meets black
    The starry night.
    Fly me high
    With wings on air
    Soar with me
    If you dare.....




    Submitted on 2008-05-10 18:17:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is good, and i ought fly wit u.when do we fly?
    lovely piece
    | Posted on 2011-01-05 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      This is great, it has a nice flow. Fly me high with wings on air, that is really good.

    Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, i love this! awesome write here, great imagery. wouldn't change a thing. a fave
    | Posted on 2009-02-11 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      where blue meets black.....I loved that the most. You brought the dark to the light and it was amazing.
    good job

    Denise
    | Posted on 2008-05-13 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
      Enlivening!!!
    | Posted on 2008-05-12 00:00:00 | by Luvmiannie | [ Reply to This ]


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