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    dots Submission Name: Rose'sdots
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    Author: Reneey Umbra
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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    dotsRose'sdots
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    How pretty
    They are, lying on the bed
    Crawling on the walls
    Walking on the floors

    A rustle they make
    from being bunched up together
    The petals twisted into curved lines
    the vine line up neatly
    And the thorn sharp as ever

    But where did they come from?
    From you of course!
    Why, did you just think that they
    appear like that?

    They are from your tears
    that never fall
    They are from your fears
    that are always in the back of your mind

    They are from your dresses
    That cover up the evidence
    They are from your secret part
    that you hid from the world

    The rose carries it's all
    The pain and tears
    The love and tender
    The madness and lust
    and the happiness and trust

    They fall from your tears
    crawl from your fears
    skip from your innocence
    leaving you vulnerable

    The roses
    are like family and friends
    they accept you
    and you accept them
    (now if only your real family could be that way)

    But truth be told
    you are the rose
    the rose is not you
    but the other way around

    You hide within the petals
    and shake inside the vine
    as your edges is the thorn

    The rose, holds and carries
    much stuff
    within it's self




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    ||| Comments |||
      This was going really good, at least until the part about the family sort of made me go "huh?" I sort of thought it was about someone being abused but that line now makes me think that she's being abused by someone and is mad because her family doesn't like her being abused. So please tell me what it's suppose to be about because right now I'm just a bit confused.
    | Posted on 2008-05-12 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]



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