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    Author: Reneey Umbra
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    Sticking out the window, the branches

    Slam against the loving gaze as I

    Sit here and wonder why do I

    Why do I, have to stay here all alone?

    The branches swish back and forth

    Almost as if it's saying come on

    And I sit here locked in

    My little room waiting for the time

    To come, where the branches break

    And I stay here, locked in my

    Darkest times as I wait for my

    Light to come just as the branch

    Falls down to the ground

    Where it lays in my deep sorrow

    My knight never did come

    Where he promised me he would

    Jus as the tree promised the

    Branch that she would not fall

    So I linger along waiting

    Waiting for my knight to come

    And rescue me from this blasted

    Hell here it comes

    And the tree branch falls

    Drowning in my sorrow

    And I stay here, stay here

    Lingering in my abnormal

    Obsession with my darkness

    As the tree branch falls

    So do I




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