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    dots Submission Name: A Momdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 794
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       I put this silly thing in my mom's mother's day card. Enjoy.. I love my mommy.


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    dotsA Momdots
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    A mom is someone,
    irreplacable,
    kind and smart.

    A mom is someone,
    that thinks with their heart.

    A mom is someone,
    you can go to,
    when life gets tough.

    A mom is someone,
    filled with love.

    A mom is someone,
    that shines a light,
    through the darkness.

    A mom is someone,
    that tries to fill life with happiness.

    A mom is someone,
    that's very special,
    to you.

    And I'm so glad,
    that my mommy is you.

    Happy Mother's Day ^-^




    Submitted on 2008-05-12 08:57:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      heeeheee! this sounds like something i would say to my mom in my baby voice. Which i do....
    | Posted on 2009-01-27 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      That was awesome. I love how you put the "hidden message" in there. Never seen anything like that before. I hope my son feels the same about me. Very cool!

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    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by Seagirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute though the borded words make the whole thing sort of sound a bit childish. I'm sure your mom would have loved this even without the message being made out by those words. Other then that, good job.
    | Posted on 2008-05-12 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah you love your mommie!! she sounds wonderful
    | Posted on 2008-05-12 00:00:00 | by Luvmiannie | [ Reply to This ]


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