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    dots Submission Name: I'm a phantomdots
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    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 113/123/144
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI'm a phantomdots
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    I'm a phantom, I'm a ghost;
    Why do I heed their insolent words
    Why do I strive to no longer drift
    When I know they never see how allusive I truly am.




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