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    dots Submission Name: I'm a phantomdots

    Author: emoxday
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 113/123/144
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI'm a phantomdots

    I'm a phantom, I'm a ghost;
    Why do I heed their insolent words
    Why do I strive to no longer drift
    When I know they never see how allusive I truly am.

    Submitted on 2008-05-12 13:24:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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