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I'm a phantom

Author: emoxday
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Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I'm a phantom

I'm a phantom, I'm a ghost;
Why do I heed their insolent words
Why do I strive to no longer drift
When I know they never see how allusive I truly am.

Submitted on 2008-05-12 13:24:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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