Tears flow down my cheeks
as the car runs through
the dusty and ghostl streets
The moon shines bright and
seems like my only companion
on this sleepless night of
faraway family and friends
Though I'm not completely alone,
there is a sadness
In my hear that can never
be removed
I feel that this poem could have a lot more things in it as well as length. It seems just a little too short for me but it has a great start. My favorite lines are: Tears flow down my cheeks
as the car runs through
the dusty and ghostly streets.
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Keep it up! So far so good ;)
Submission Name: Alone
