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    dots Submission Name: Weary of Waitingdots
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    Author: Voodoo_Lounge
    ASL Info:    21/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408/588/171
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWeary of Waitingdots
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    So weary of waiting-
    This unsteady shaking,
    Waiting for you to come home.
    Who the hell am I
    As I sit here all alone?




    Submitted on 2008-05-13 12:20:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The woman biting your nails, filled with irrational worry because you feel like you're half-missing and counting the moments to being complete again. The fish drowning in air, the melting ice in a glass of tea. I feel for you on this one, because it's all too familiar.
    | Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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