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    dots Submission Name: Darling Gooddots

    Author: Jimi James
    ASL Info:    24/m/somehwere
    Elite Ratio:    6.16 - 90/78/41
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 958
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    Bytes: 329

       song for my miss misery.
    she was good tone.so.who?
    writing is the quest for acknowledgement and succes.
    Not more than love, though.
    being spotted right now.?
    dont know.something:
    gives me the creeps to know anything about someones feelings, somehow.
    The creeps: you know.

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    dotsDarling Gooddots

    ...and faith
    all the winners
    are telling lies
    for you

    modern age
    my ceilling

    show the way
    my darling
    give a-way

    darling good
    know you do
    my innocence
    no well

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