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    dots Submission Name: Why, why why?dots
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    Author: SuperMel
    Elite Ratio:    4.77 - 11/8/12
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Just a vent


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    Why Am I so weak?
    Why is it that I can never find strengh to speak?
    Why am I so afarid?
    Why I do guys try to take of contorl me?
    Don't they know me strong enough to live on our own?
    Why can't I ever say what's on my mind, why do I act that I'm always fine?
    That even though deep, deep inside, I know that it's all a big lie.
    Why is that I feel everything I do in life is a waste of time?
    Why can't things just be 'fine'?
    Why is it that everything takes time?
    Why, why, why?
    I know deep in my heart they won't be.
    People say, "Everything will be fine, things just take time''

    When is my time gonna come?




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