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    dots Submission Name: ~::Fallen Angel::~dots
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    Author: Silima
    ASL Info:    21/F/Missouri, US
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 1/5/7
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 561
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       I just felt like talking about fallen angels.


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    dots~::Fallen Angel::~dots
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    The night sky sparkles,
    With its evil revealing light,
    Never showing a tomorrow,
    It binds our souls to the stars,
    I am falling from the heavens,
    From a falling star,
    Black wings shimmer,
    With a pearl essence red,
    A little girl stares,
    With amazement and bewilderment,
    All I can do is smile,
    And I hit the ground,
    The blood that should trinkle from my mouth,
    Not a trace was found,
    I am the one of your dreams,
    The one winged angel of death,
    Here to steal your soul,
    and bring it to peace at last.




    Submitted on 2008-05-15 11:01:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this poem for my has a little fog,
    I am the one of your dreams,
    The [one] winged angel of death,
    Here to steal your soul,
    and bring it to peace at last.

    I'm just a lttle unclear on that one point.


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    | Posted on 2008-05-15 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

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