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To Excess and Beyond

Author: huntingjonathon
ASL Info:    31/M/San Fran
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Words: 79
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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To Excess and Beyond

Our motto was always,
“To excess and beyond.”
You just had to test the limits of

If you think that you can handle 10 shots,
you do 15;
not 20,
that would just be stupid.

And what if someone dies?
What do you say then?

they were falsifying their attempts
at self discovery.
They were merely testing
someone else’s limits.
That’s all.

-jonathon shank

Submitted on 2008-05-16 03:23:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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