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    dots Submission Name: †~::End Of My Days::~†dots

    Author: Silima
    ASL Info:    21/F/Missouri, US
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 1/5/7
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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       Just something I made up last night out of nowhere. kind of crazy.

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    dots†~::End Of My Days::~†dots

    The one person who I don’t have to impress,
    With forgotten motions of loneliness,
    For once was frozen,
    Is now thawed again,
    The item that lies deep within,
    To hold your hand to my chest,
    Doesn’t mean you can feel it yet,
    The heart is a shallow storm,
    Thrashing as it goes on,
    Only to one day burst into pieces,
    And forgotten for no reason,
    This is my immortal verse,
    For every mortal suffers the worse,
    We all learn to live and die,
    To be forgotten in their eyes,
    We also learn of love and lust,
    That one day will suddenly bust,
    But as we learn of what is ahead,
    Which is the eternal rest with the dead,
    What doesn’t frighten,
    Is lost and forgotten,
    So now as I lay down to sleep,
    And I pray my heart you will keep,
    And only then I realize
    The end of my days,
    Is just a shorter time away.

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