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    dots Submission Name: Pain & Lovedots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 332
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       pain and love in and out good and bad


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    dotsPain & Lovedots
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    Pain and Love
    Love knocks at my chest but I ponder on the thought of letting him in
    Behind him comes pain his twin and best friend
    The real question is how can you stop a feeling such as love
    Well not stop, but contain the sensations that are is and cause
    At least slow my hearts speed to allow my brain to focus and catch up
    Without his brother threatens the sentiments love has showed thus
    I sit with question on the road ahead me to read and decifier
    As these emotions burn in my chest fuel to the fire
    Feeling the need for release but waiting for the second parties approval
    Because for the pain of the heart there really is no tribunal
    Waiting on her to make a notion of the same or for a few words to slip
    Like I love you or a synonym that relates to phrase or hints
    Then thoughts of jumping out and just getting all the emotions off my chest
    Which can end up making a hole where those emotions stem and rest?
    You love with your heart so how can you logically think with your brain
    Because the common consensus is loving a person through thick and thin and being in love
    And insanity is one in the same
    At the peak of the mountain with a sensation of love in your chest
    In the dark abyss when pain makes a home and love has left
    Pain and love
    Love and pain
    Highest of highs the heart and its game
    Names of people become sketch and then fade
    But some last longer than other and a tattoo is made
    Love is what we all strive too be in pain what we all try and stay away
    Well love is pain and pain is love brothers of same cloth
    The yin and yang of relationship working together Zen is seen and caught




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