come find me -------------------------------------------
...hidden for so long
I'm ready
come find me
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I'm ready
Search high and low
where I am you don't know
come and find me
...it's been awhile
and I hide here still waiting
Listened around me
but no ones around me
Did you search high and low
did you know where to go
didn't find me
will you find me
I guess you gave up
though you counted to twenty
Guess that you looked
but you still couldn't find me
oh where have you gone
have you searched for too long
to find me
Now I'm alone
and I'm hiding in fear now
You should have looked here
too late you're gone now
and it's me alone now
where have you gone
come find me
come find me
...
why did you leave me
come back to me
love me
ready or not here I come
please be ready
it was pretty good...i really liked the middle of it all...it was very...i don't know how to say it...realistic?....like i could feel what you were...but i will say one thing...as i always do so don't be offended from what i say...i thought the beginning could have been a bit better...like you could have been more on starting up the game and then in the end said that you've been hidden for so long...because when you said that first...it gives away the ending and makes it less interesting to read.....and then the ending kinda just fell off of a cliff...if you know what i mean...it was kinda dry and ordinary...you should have said something about how they left and what might have been the reason but here you come ready or not or something along those lines...but all together it was tasteful...and i enjoyed it
Submission Name: come find me
