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    dots Submission Name: Obsessive Infatuationdots
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    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 902
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 623



    Description:
       obsessed with a picture


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    dotsObsessive Infatuationdots
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    Once again I fall in love with a picture
    It always be an inescapable guilty pleasure
    Oh how I tranquilly drowned in an imagination
    That transcends into a divine obsession

    A lady in paint haunts me every night
    Giving me an excessive mystical sight
    I yield before a God given beauty
    This will never lack in its natural piety

    So there will be a permanent illusion
    A gift that fuels the wheels of my fascination
    A mere paper that brighten my strange infatuation
    For I will Always Never Yield in Every condition





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