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    dots Submission Name: Live for livedots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    16/M/Everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 98/113/104
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 68
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    Bytes: 709



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       My atempt and writing again, be kind


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    dotsLive for livedots
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    My lifetime has shown my countless things
    Love, struggle, pain, agression, insomnia
    And that list shall continue forever
    And while looking at how long the list is
    I found it worth it, living I mean
    I've lost comrades, gained companions
    Experience the words and souls of musical beauty of all levels
    Seens summers glow, winters chill
    Falls beauty and felt spring embrace
    I've loved and lost, only to find once more and misplace
    And I found this, that, all of it worth it
    So as advice, even if you didn't ask of it
    Live, for there will always be a next today
    Might as well see if it'll be good right?




    Submitted on 2008-05-18 06:55:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "And that list shall continue forever"
    That was my favorite line. It's a reminder that life's experiences are ongoing.
    | Posted on 2008-05-18 00:00:00 | by Sparkster | [ Reply to This ]
      Well I like it, I even read it twice.
    I like how you took me through
    the seasons like that.
    I think this is a good write.
    Not perfect, but good.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-05-18 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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