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    dots Submission Name: From The Mouths of Lionsdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 422
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 356



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       We have a beautiful fountain in our front flower garden. Happy Monday ES! love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share


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    dotsFrom The Mouths of Lionsdots
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    Out the mouths
    of Gothic Lions
    Rhythm flowed
    words of wonder
    A fountain
    of Being
    Collected
    A Sparkling
    Pool
    Sprinkling
    over
    boundaries
    to nurture
    All
    below
    Green hands
    cupped
    to gather
    nectar
    water
    life




    Submitted on 2008-05-19 08:41:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thank you for your comment on my poem "Holocaust Poem"

    This poems title caught my eye, and intrigued as I was I couldn't resist clicking on it lol.
    This had a very nice flow, and created a nice image in my mind. This poem really shows your talent. Being able to express such scenes in a few lines is amazing, and having it sound good is even better! Over all a very nice piece!
    | Posted on 2008-10-30 00:00:00 | by AllyV | [ Reply to This ]
      Something good, cool, and refreshing coming from the Mouths of Lions! The title intrigued me, and I couldn't resist this! Nice work, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-06-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Your lovely poem flowed like a fountain off my lips as I pictured the real thing in my head! Beauty brought to life in words. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-05-19 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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