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    dots Submission Name: Pale and Colddots
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    Author: Voodoo_Lounge
    ASL Info:    21/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408/588/171
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPale and Colddots
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    Depression is catching,
    Spreads like a mold.
    I silence my head,
    I do what I'm told.
    This has become
    My only life-
    The role of empty-headed,
    Servile little wife.
    My energy drained.
    My spirit been sold.
    I've never felt so old,
    Pale and cold.




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      Dam*it. You have a knack for bringing out jealousy of your expression and the urge to hug you at the same time lately. I love the first two lines, and that you used a fungus in them to make the analogy, it's very expressive of the perspective you seem to have gained of late. I think you need to get away from everyone but yourself for a week and try to get back to you, before you wind up hating him for taking you away from yourself. I know I did for a while, even though he didn't and it was freely given, it just leads to loathing and sorrow. Please, please, take some you-time, Victoria. :P
    | Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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