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    dots Submission Name: Curedots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 542
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    dotsCuredots
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    I've been stumbling
    all along
    Just to find the words,
    As i break my fall
    I catch a heart
    Just to find It's her's,
    And who better,
    for it to be,
    as she cushions the blow,
    Of me hitting reality,
    leaking red,
    To the snow?




    Submitted on 2008-05-19 12:57:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ohhh i like this!!

    It had some really great imagery! Almost every single line painted a vivid picture.

    My favorite part are the first two lines =]
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]
      This was short and sweet. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2008-05-22 00:00:00 | by mysterious one | [ Reply to This ]


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