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    dots Submission Name: Feardots
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    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsFeardots
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    Everyday I walk out that door I fear for my life.
    Gangs, guns, kills, drugs all enter my life when I walk out that door
    School can be tough too, as I fear the presser and fear being judged by others
    There's a lot of fear in my life the world, but I don't just ignore it I face it head.
    The strangth I possess my not change the world but I set an example for others to follow.
    We all have fears nothing can stop that, but along with fears we have dreams too.
    To be the next rapper, model, singer, actor,
    but befor we can reach those dream we must overcome ower fears first.
    I know it my be hard but soon it will be all worth wild knowing that you overcome these fears.
    Because overcome your fear is the greatest thing in this world of fear




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      i agree with you 100%....to get anywhere in life you have to overcome those fears that tug at your gut. its hard but its something that you just have to do.....
    one of my biggest fear was standing in front of a lot of people (stage fright) and now in the Idaho's Treasure Valley Honor Choir, i was a semi finalist in the Idahos Rising Star competition....and i wouldnt have gotten anywhere if i wouldnt have over come my fears.....what have you had to over come???? i really like this write.
    ~kayla~
    | Posted on 2008-05-21 00:00:00 | by lonely goth | [ Reply to This ]


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