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    dots Submission Name: come find me dots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 760
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    ...hidden in silence
    I'm ready
    come find me
    1234567
    I'm ready
    Search high and low
    where I am you don't know
    come and find me

    ...it's been awhile
    and I hide here still waiting
    Listened around me
    but no ones around me
    Gotta search high and low
    do you know where to go
    come find me
    Hope you find me



    I guess you gave up
    though you counted to twenty
    Guess that you looked
    but you still couldn't find me
    oh where have you gone
    have you searched for too long
    could you find me

    Now I'm alone
    and I'm still hiding here now
    You should have looked here
    too late you're gone now
    and it's me alone now
    oh where have you gone
    you lost me
    didn't find me

    Lost faith in hope
    As I gained fear inside me
    inside me....are you inside me?
    I could have been your truth
    Could have found me in you
    but you lost me
    didn't find me


    why did you leave me
    come back to me
    love me
    ready or not here I come
    please be
    why did you leave me
    come back to me
    love me
    ready or not here I come
    why did you leave me
    come back to me
    love me
    why did you leave me
    come back to me
    love me
    why did you leave me
    come back to me
    love me.....




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