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    dots Submission Name: LIFEdots

    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Will we win that final fight, that last hour
    Or will we fall on our knees and cower
    Will we become that beautiful rose
    Or shall we shrivil and turn from what we chose
    Will we be the statue and stand tall
    Or will we give up and fall
    Beyond the horizon will we set a while
    Or rise in the night sky and smile
    Will we go until the end
    what shall you do my friend

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