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    dots Submission Name: Remeberdots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsRemeberdots
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    Remember when we watched the sunset,
    thoses times I'lll never forget.
    Remember when we watched the tide,
    then; you never left my side.
    Remember when we had our first fight,
    I cried, and you held me tight.
    Remember when you said goodbye,
    by your bedside, I started to die.
    Remeber when we watched the sunset,
    that last time I'll never forget.




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