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    dots Submission Name: broken heart, broken dreamsdots
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    Author: kairi bloom
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 9/47/37
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 186
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1108



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    dotsbroken heart, broken dreamsdots
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    Inside her heart is nothing but sorrow
    for he left her, she was only to borrow
    Now anywhere she goes she remembers him
    And the light no longer shines, it is only dim

    His face resides as she regrets
    she must ask for happines before she forgets
    Her closest friend is miles away
    she longs for the time to see her that day

    Her face no longer holds a smile
    Her heart has felt powers so vile
    People see tears from her face
    but do nothing, only embrace

    she now sits alone with a heavy heart
    As she drifts from the world apart
    She gave him the keys
    and now gasping for breath uttering PLEASE

    She will do anything to rid herself of such pain
    But right now, she will just cry in the rain
    She has already lost it
    and now you will see every little bit

    That girl is me, as i live on
    my head held low, as i deal with a con
    i will love you as he never loved me
    as my name startes with a v







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      You will be a writer when you grow up. I just know it.
    | Posted on 2008-05-21 00:00:00 | by Kat Tudor | [ Reply to This ]
      good poem, from the way you write i could tell you have potential to become an writter
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